I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 20 September 2019
Friday, 23 August 2019
My story. The Train Is Late.
2/8/2019
Every day the train would be on time to pick up the people who needed to go somewhere. But one day the train didn't arrive. All the people were wondering where it was.
30 miles down the track the train had come to a complete stop. There was another train in front that had fallen off the track. It had gone too fast round the corner and slid off the rails. All the people where getting very annoyed because they didn't know what was happening.
Some of the passengers were starting to leave and go home. Next to the train station there was an airport. The train driver called a plane to land at the airport and take the people to where they needed to be. The plane landed and the plane driver said on the big microphone “There has been a bit of a delay. The train driver has sent me to pick everyone up and drop you off to where you need to be. So if everyone could please climb aboard and take a seat!!!” said loudly through the microphone. Everyone climbed aboard and took a seat. The plane slowly took off and went high into the sky. Once the passengers were above their destination they took a parachute and jumped off the plane. The people that were still on the plane could see the people parachute down. After everyone jumped off the plane went to land back at the airport. While the plane driver was flying back to the airport he thought to himself “ I’ll put the plane on auto drive so I can go to the shop“ so he put the plane on auto drive. He took a parachute and jumped out and landed in front of a lolly shop. He got all the lollies he could back at the plane, the plane had hit a big bird and the engines were smoking. The plane was on fire and it was going straight down into the water. THE PLANE WASN'T SEEN IN YEARS...
THE END…
PART 2…
THE TRAIN IS LATE.
One day there were 3 people on a boat looking for wrecks of things, today was their lucky day. The three people had never seen a wreck before because it was their first day. They were about a few meters from the plane wreck. The 3 people dived down and looked around. They couldn't see anything until they looked behind them and they saw… The plane wreck They swam as fast as they could. They were finally there.
They were looking at the plane and they all started to recognize it. Then they realized that it was the plane they parachuted off.
They started to swim inside the plane wreck. They were at the very bottom of the plane and then one of the people said “Look our oxygen is nearly” empty so they tried to swim out of the plane as fast as they could but they couldn't find the way out. There was only one percent of oxygen left. They found the way out and lost all of their oxygen and one of the people passed out. The other two didn't know until they looked back. They had to swim up out of water and refill there tanks. But instead they just took them off and swam to go get there friend they swam down… down… and down they were at the plane wreck and couldn't see him. They swam through the plane wreck. There he was lying down on the floor of the wrecked plane. They took him up to the boat but they had to be quick because they were nearly out of breath. But just in the right amount of time they made it to the boat. There friend coughed out all of the water and he was fine. They sailed back to shore and they kept on finding wrecks.
THE END...
Wednesday, 15 May 2019
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